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ajremixTitle: Waking Nightmare
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 261
Characters: Naruto and… others
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naruto100's My Not So Happy Ending Challenge
Summary: I don’t normally get affected by what I write, but this left a bad taste in my mouth. I guess I did what I intended to do then^^;;
“And you wanted to save me. A weak, pathetic bastard like you?”
He twisted the kunai in Naruto’s side, like a screwdriver that tore through his liver.
“Disgusting. You couldn’t even save those that WANTED to be saved.”
Belatedly he slammed on the blade that pinned Naruto’s elbow to the ground- just to see if he would scream any different.
“Not your precious Sakura or that worthless Kakashi or that pitiful Hinata or that stupid, brainless, pathetic Iruka.”
The Kyuubi tried to stir but a foot stomped on his stomach, causing bile to shot out of Naruto’s mouth and losing his focus.
“So what are you going to do now, useless?” Sasuke leaned down with eyes the color of spilt blood and tenderly wiped away a tear that trickled through Naruto’s shut lids. “Cry for me.” He whispered with a malicious grin that never surfaced. “And maybe I’ll keep you.”
Naruto gasped, falling to his knees- too shaken to throw up, to frightened to even see straight.
With a thoughtless little push, Itachi sent the boy spilling on his side with a foot. “How disappointing.” He said to himself. “And here I thought you’d be interesting.” He looked up at the mountain, at what wasn’t irreparably destroyed in the battle. “Get rid of them.” He told the ninjas behind them. “We have no need for dead traditions.”
He crossed the roof and stopped, looking back at the comatose Naruto and the ruins of his once proud home. “Burn the village.” Itachi said as an afterthought. “We have no need for it.”
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 261
Characters: Naruto and… others
In Response to:
naruto100's My Not So Happy Ending ChallengeSummary: I don’t normally get affected by what I write, but this left a bad taste in my mouth. I guess I did what I intended to do then^^;;
“And you wanted to save me. A weak, pathetic bastard like you?”
He twisted the kunai in Naruto’s side, like a screwdriver that tore through his liver.
“Disgusting. You couldn’t even save those that WANTED to be saved.”
Belatedly he slammed on the blade that pinned Naruto’s elbow to the ground- just to see if he would scream any different.
“Not your precious Sakura or that worthless Kakashi or that pitiful Hinata or that stupid, brainless, pathetic Iruka.”
The Kyuubi tried to stir but a foot stomped on his stomach, causing bile to shot out of Naruto’s mouth and losing his focus.
“So what are you going to do now, useless?” Sasuke leaned down with eyes the color of spilt blood and tenderly wiped away a tear that trickled through Naruto’s shut lids. “Cry for me.” He whispered with a malicious grin that never surfaced. “And maybe I’ll keep you.”
Naruto gasped, falling to his knees- too shaken to throw up, to frightened to even see straight.
With a thoughtless little push, Itachi sent the boy spilling on his side with a foot. “How disappointing.” He said to himself. “And here I thought you’d be interesting.” He looked up at the mountain, at what wasn’t irreparably destroyed in the battle. “Get rid of them.” He told the ninjas behind them. “We have no need for dead traditions.”
He crossed the roof and stopped, looking back at the comatose Naruto and the ruins of his once proud home. “Burn the village.” Itachi said as an afterthought. “We have no need for it.”
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Date: 2005-05-23 03:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-24 02:03 am (UTC)And everytime I squick myself (as i had in this case) I always wonder why no one's sent me to a psyciatrist yet. I scare myself sometimes. Seriously.
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Date: 2005-05-24 05:34 pm (UTC)