ext_1502: (ishida (by v_voltaire))
ext_1502 ([identity profile] sub-divided.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ajremix 2005-04-28 01:11 am (UTC)

Ishida-fic love! But I think the tense is wrong in the last sentence: "That day he died, I pledge, on my pride as a Quincy, that I would never miss again." Pledged? Otherwise, it's got a lot of impact.
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